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Review:ReeBee says:
Ooh! It was good! I'm interested! But, will the flashbacks be sad? I hope not :( Frank seems lovely! I can't bear the thought of something bad happening to them, even though it did!

So, the characterisation was really good! In just one chapter, it was really gave a good idea of the characters and their personalities :) Great job with that! :D

The description was good too! It was well written and in the exact places where it would help smoothen the flow! I like the addition of the lady rushing off to switch off her oven! It kind of showed us that Frank, like everyone else, was affected a lot by the first war.

The flow was a bit slow, but, it was only the first chapter, so don't worry about that!

Great job with this chapter! Thanks for the amazing review swap! :D

Author's Response: Hi there! Thank you! Heh, you'll have to find out? Some of the flashbacks aren't sad. :p

I'm so glad you liked the characterisation - that's great to hear that you were able to get such a good idea of their personalities in such a short chapter!

Thank you so much, I really work on my description so I'm glad you pointed it out :) Hehe, I'm glad you liked her running to switch the oven off - that's exactly what I was going for. There are some things - like the constant fear during a war, I'd imagine - that once you get them into your head, they don't go away.

It does start out a little slow - I'm glad you didn't mind that though ;)

Thanks so much for the swap, it was fun! ♥

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