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Review:GingeredTea says:
Here with a very belated review swap (sorry!)

I really enjoyed this story. I loved that you didn't choice to focus on the why of their recovery but instead just carried on with the story as if it really were Frank. I hope that makes sense. :)

The narrative and pace of the story were really well done. The ending left me wanting a bit more closure - was his nap supposed to symbolize something, the thunder and dead man mean something is coming? Then again, this really is a good thing if you intend to go somewhere with this story. LOL

I will be interesting to see if Frank recalls any of his earlier life and if there IS something coming.

Wonderfully done.

Thank you for the read! I'll come back for more if we meet on a swap again.

Author's Response: Hi there! Huh, I don't even remember the review swap haha - well, thank you! :)

Thanks, I'm glad you liked that! The 'why' of the recovery isn't so important at this point in the story, though later it might be.

That's great to hear about the narrative and the pace. I know it starts out rather slow so I'm glad to hear that it works! :) Ah yes the ending. Hahaha, I'm glad it leaves you wanting to read more - as you say, that's the idea.

Thanks so much for reading and for your wonderful review!

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