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Review:LightLeviosa5443 says:

I really loved this chapter! Fred, oh Fred! I almost feel bad for him, but I think that Aaliyah and Albus are so cute I just can't get over it. I'm totally going over this in reverse but I don't care. What exactly did Fred do to Aaliyah?

Gabby is too funny, making sure that Albus actually likes Aaliyah.. But does he? I'm surprised James didn't pay him a visit, this'll be interesting. Oh Scorpius, focus on Rose why don't you!

The list, oh man oh man the list, that was priceless. Albus really should've just taken Scorpius' advice and made some stuff up. I really liked Aaliyah's input of "good snogger" though. It's believable and really fits her character!

Oh no, the article. That really is dreadful. They better clean up their act and learn to put on a good show. Otherwise no one is going to believe them and they won't take the spot as the golden couple. I'd love to seem them as the golden couple, though!

I can't wait for you to put up the next chapter! I just know it's going to be amazing and this story is going into my favorite's and my currently reading!!!

xoxo LL

Author's Response: This chapter was by far the hardest to write out of all four. I was really scared it wouldn't come out right so thanks for your reassurance! I almost feel bad for him too, almost. And he did a couple things to Aaliyah. That will all come out in due time.

Gabby is a bit protective over Aaliyah, haha. And James is giving them some space but he'll be in Chapter 6 and 7. And does Albus like Aaliyah? He doesn't hate her but he doesn't like her like that. He still doesn't know her too well.

Hehe the list was kind of a spur of the moment thing and I'm glad you liked that part. And hehe Scorpius.

Ronan... that's just the beginning. And will they clean up their act, who knows? ;)

Thank you so so so much for reading and reviewing. It means so much to me and I can literally hug you for being so kind and sweet. :D

P.S. Chapter 5 is in the que!! :)

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