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Review:Rumpelstiltskin says:
Hey there!

I'm here from Review Tag on the forums!

While I was reading, preparing myself through the typical introduction setup: mother's gushing over daughter(s) and sending them on their way, I couldn't help but stumble over "Wanda said it gives you warts." I loved the child-like nature of the association to Muggle music. It definitely reminded me of the innocent 'rumors' surrounding certain elements that children often adhere to: boys have cooties and Mum said if you make that face, then it will freeze like that forever. :D It made me laugh.

Directly following, the conversations with the boys also captured this childish nature exquisitely. I love how Duncan teases Augusta. Then, when Alice so delicately interjects "You're Augusta's BOYFRIEND!" I nearly died. In fact, I'm almost certain that Augusta nearly died of pure mortification as well.

...No commentary Fat Lady... :p that was adorable.

In fact, I found most of the interactions and general teasing to be quite adorable. It definitely made me laugh at points, and I think you have a nice start to a cute, fluffy story, here.

-Rumpel

Author's Response: Thanks!

I wanted my story to be different from most. The childlike nature was intended and I'm glad you noticed it. (:
As we grow up, there is always still some child in us, no matter how mature we seem to be.
Thanks again! (:

xox,
LG


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