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Review:LightLeviosa5443 says:
Review swap!

Oh man oh man! This was a fantastic chapter! I loved it!

I was a little aprehensive when I read the summary, because it seemed vague and I wasn't sure where you were intending to go with it, but this was great. Your characterization of James and Albus were fantastic and I really like Gabby and her sister Aaliyah. I'm going to paste the comments I wrote down while I read the story, just because they're an entertaining mumble jumble and I think you'll appreciate them more than a put together review.

Gossipy paintings. Those are brilliant, every good story set in Hogwarts has though! Ooh, an interview? This'll be interesting. Why is she doing an interview? Enter into room and: A sibling. Rivalry? Is her sister going to interview her? Is that a Potter I smell? Yes, yes it is.

Staring contest, go! So cute, can they be a couple? I'd love that...! Heels clicking? Mcgonagall? Are they gonna get caught? But they haven't even had their interview yet! Oh! It's their interviewer, okay, okay, that makes sense. Awe they were a couple, why'd they break up? But they're still a thing, or just know each other?

Oh Albus, you little trouble-maker. Stirring the pot, I see what you're doing. A proposition, oh boy, he's gonna tell her to date him. Yup. That happened. Can she please change her mind? Because then they can date and fall in love and live happily ever after.

Wow. I sounded ridiculous in that, but that's okay. I really enjoyed this chapter. And to top it off I found no grammatical errors to comment on!

Thanks for posting about doing a review swap because that was fun and I have a story to read!

10/10

xoxo LL

Author's Response: Hi!

You are right. I loved hearing your thoughts as you read the story. And yes that is a Potter you smell, actually two. I'm really happy that you liked the four of them.

Hmmm... Can they be a couple? Maybe, just maybe. Gabby and James technically aren't a thing but they grew to know each other well.

Albus is very mischievous and cunning, haha. And happily ever after isn't really his style but you never know, maybe he will get a happy ending with a certain someone. ;)

And you totally didn't sound ridiculous. I understood everything, haha. And I'm glad we did the review swap. Your story was great. And thanks for being so kind and honest! :D

~Sama



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