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Review:toomanycurls says:
I've been waiting to read this!! So excited!!! :D

Knowing what will happen at the party, Sirius' thoughts on Remus are especially hilarious.

I love the banter between the marauders - it flows really well and makes me feel their friendship.

Aw, poor James. :( He seems so vulnerable when he asks her to dance. I can't blame Lily's attitude. oh gosh, I laughed so hard though when James said "but I'm handsome"

I just want to cuddle Sirius for being so sweet to Mary. ^_^ That's the only reason too. :P I do like that they both have some emotional connection with one another. It's a side of Sirius that isn't often talked about

I really love that Sirius is critical of James - at least in his own head. That's something.

The party from Siruis' POV is quite different than the others. His dancing with Lily is quite scandalous - she's quite astute to catch his sneakiness.

I'm getting the feeling that the party is less fun for Sirius than it is for others. Between not getting kissed, having to help out Melissa, and putting up with his disrobing friends - he kind of seems like the only sober person there.

ah! Drama in the corridors! Slytherins v. Gryffindors. They're a bit outnumbered. Too bad Remus is busy getting his wolf on and James has lost his clothes.

I'm not sure my reaction, to hearing those noises behind a door, would be to open it to see who was in there. I'd just slowly creep away.

:-o James and Kendra! That ... you know what I want to say here... ! :P

I think I enjoyed Sirius' version of the party the most!

-Rose

Author's Response: Hi Rose!

I'm excited too! And yay! I'm glad you like their friendship! And yes, poor James, but he really needs to learn to tone it down!

Ooh, and Mary! He's so sweet to her! Gosh, and his James criticism! Gosh, I really liked writing this, especially with dear old Lily!

And yes, this was not Sirius Black's finest party! Ack I know! Where are the other marauders when you need them? Oh right... Haha! I might too, but Slytherins aren't exactly the walking away type when it comes to potential humiliation.

And yes I do, but don't be mad at Kendra! I love Kendra! Ooh, I'm excited to see if you still feel that way after everyone else's!

Thanks Rose!
Lo:)


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