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Review:LilyLou says:
Hi! Here for our review swap!

This is different, I have to say. There aren't too many stories out there about the three sister, Andromeda in particular. This is a great start to your short story collection!

I love how naive Andromeda and Cissy are. Naturally, Bella isn't nearly as naive, although she still seems to believe the lies her mother feeds her. Of course, every small child does.

Lucius was so adorable! He was terrified! And that is completely believable, given the fact that he's a coward throughout everything JK describes. So I think you wrote him well.

I love how you mentioned the burns, and the heads, and the portrait of Pollux and Irma. I have a story with them in it right now, actually, so it's nice to see that you remembered to mention them.

What a lovely story!

-Janelle

Author's Response: Hi Janelle!

I know, I think that's why I wanted to write it because they've always been a family interest me and here was a chance to explore them a little more.

I'm glad that you liked all of them in their younger selves. It was so much fun to write because I had to base their characterisation on their later selves which was a little different.

Yes, including all those little Black things was actually a lot of fun so it's great to hear you liked them!

Thanks for the great review!

-Kiana


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