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Review:patronus_charm says:
Hi, here from review tag!

Wow this was a really great end to the story! Even though you tied up all of the characters and their stories, it wasnít done in a rushed way or anything which Iíve seen done lots of times before but you put real care and thought behind what happened to them all and it was all lovely. Then the way you made links as well was really great.

First with the Ravenclaws, I really liked that Rowena took in Marigold as her own and trained her up because I always felt that Marigold deserved to do well in the world and succeed and now she finally got her chance. You wrote Rowena very well too and she definitely felt in character and everything. I felt so sorry for poor old Helena though. It was the first time Iíve seen her as so flighty and light-headed but I really liked that side to her because it showed why she wanted to go against her mother. The ominous feel you left us on with what happened to the pair of them was really great!

Aw, Marigold and Trip married and I loved how you used that to tie it together to make sure that Harry was a line of the Peverells too and ended up with the cloak. Then there was the great comparison with the son of Stephane, because though Stephane was ok as the Slytherins went he had his father around at least so it made me wonder whether there could have been hope for Voldemort with his mother around. The fact that both Harry and Voldemortís ancestors were sort of friends was really great and an interesting twist.

You ended it perfectly and this was such a great read, with beautiful writing, characters and description!

-Kiana

Author's Response: Hi again! :) You are so lovely for leaving me such nice reviews on these last two chapters, I was so excited to get an opinion on them!

I'm glad you liked the epilogue and didn't think it was rushed, as I was a little concerned about that. I have full life stories for a bunch of these characters in my head but don't have the time and energy to write them, so I hope I did them justice! Thinking of the links between them was a great deal of fun, hehe. :)

Yes! Aw, I'm glad you're rooting for Marigold as I really do adore her. I felt like she and Ravenclaw would balance one another out as Marigold cares too much and Rowena is very cold. I know, poor Helena. :( I feel so sorry for her both in canon and in this story, but I hope it made sense why she turned out that way. I felt that she lacked her mother's strength and will, and that was a bit of her mother's fault. Yay, ominous is good!

Yes! Harry is a descendant of Marigold and Trip. I knew that at some point the Potter line crossed with the Peverells and this felt the right time to do it. That's an interesting point about Voldy, and I do feel like things might have been different for him had Merope survived. Stephane does have a kind of honour that his father lacks, but he's also easily manipulated by his father. He's not really a leader, sadly. I'm glad you liked the link between their ancestors as well- even though Marigold is far more a distant ancestor to Harry than the Slytherins are to Voldy, it's interesting to think of their family lines crossing in that way.

Thanks you for this beautiful review and following up with the story, Kiana! :) You're awesome! :D


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