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Review:800 words of heaven says:

Umbridge is such a horrible human being, I just couldn't resist popping in to have a peak inside her head!

OMG I love how her internal monologue makes her sound like a whiny adolescent (the stereotype is rather fitting I think, considering that she hates children so much). She sounds so immature - I love it!

The scariest part about Umbridge, and I think you've shown it beautifully here, is that all her hatred is borne not from some crazy obsession with no basis in reality, but from the society to which she belongs. She just perpetuates all the stereotypes and prejudices to this really extreme level, and what's even more horrible is that she's in a position of power where she can influence policy addressing these issues. I just love how you've sort of subtly included that here by mentioning how she's willing to go complain to the Minister of Magic (who one would think would have better things to worry about) at the slightest hint of her (rather juvenile) whims not being fulfilled, and how she thinks that McGonagall is after her position! I just love how she thinks that Xenophilius is this crazy paranoid person who believes in all the conspiracies, where in fact, she's closer to that description herself.

This was super enjoyable to read and I just absolutely loved this line: "What was a Hufflepuff anyway?" I SEE WHAT YOU DID THERE.

Author's Response: Oh no!! You reviewed my least favorite piece! LOL! I'm glad you enjoyed this. I have been wanting to go back a revisit this story and expand on it for some time, but have found myself occupied with other pieces for some time now. Some day maybe! Thanks for the review!

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