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Review:kenpo says:
Here with the third review!
Okay, I'm going to try to make this one a tad more... more.

You said that you're sorry for the late update (which obviously didn't affect me), but... sorry for the late review! My goal is to post "all slots open" in my thread before I go to bed tonight!

Have I mentioned that the chapter images are great? I don't think I have. The chapter images are great.

Yaaay, Rowena!

The description of the castle is really fantastic. The imagery of the mist engulfing the castle... brilliant.

I get the feeling that the Earl will not get along with Lady Slytherin.

I like your tie-in to the goblin rebellion. I've always wondered about those!

Lady Slytherin's got some opinions! I love her interaction with the Earl! You go, Girl!

Haha, ignorant coot. Hah. Can I start using that insult, please? I'll credit you (in my running internal monologue. Not verbally, that'd be weird.)

The Lady is awesome! She's so protective of her sons and of Avalon (which I'm now very curious about...)

Whoa what's wrong with her? Is there some more history between Lady Slytherin and the Earl that we don't know about? Huh. That was a sudden change in mood.

I feel bad for Rowena :(

Her interaction with the boys was cute. I want Helga!

Haha, this was a really well written chapter. I've said it before, but your writing style is just fantastic! I wish I could write prose like you.

Sorry this was so late. And I said it'd be a better review, didn't I? Well, oops. You'll have to do with this one. We could all use a little ego-stroke, right?

You're amazing. This is fantastic. Feel free to re-request when you update.

The only thing is that it's really confusing that Chapter 2 is actually Chapter 3 etc etc. I see why it's like that, though.

Overall, fantastic. I have nothing useful to say.

Author's Response: Hahaha your reviews make me smile :D I like them! Yes, Lady Slytherin is protective of Avalon, as are most people who have grown up there. The way I see it, it is a place which never leaves you, more like the idea of it, of peace and tranquility.

Yup, Rowena has had a difficult childhood, but that will all serve a purpose :). As for Helga, she has yet to appear, but don't worry, her role is big and very important: I am sort of building up the tension hahaha (as she is probably my favourite Founder)


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