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Review:patronus_charm says:
Iím so sorry about how long it took to write this review, but alas itís finally here :p

I thought that you really got into Choís mindset here, with her fear of losing Cedric and Harry then battling with real life too and I couldnít help but want to hug her because it was so horrible what was happening to her and it seemed as if everything was immersing her with no escape at all.

One small thing I would suggest would be sorting out your spacing, as it was rather tedious to continue scrolling down all the time and it jolted the flow of it from time to time.

I really liked how you drew on their houses to point out the way that they coped with everything and it was a very refreshing way to show things. Almost with all her knowledge Cho wasnít able to equip herself with the real life struggle and that was a really interesting point that you showed there.

I liked the sound of hope at the end and with Marietta trying to pull her through this because it does make me thing that happiness could be on the way for Cho and a chance to start her life again. I really enjoyed this one-shot as it was really poignant and touching to read!

-Kiana

Author's Response: That's perfectly alright!

Thanks for the great review! I'm relieved that you enjoyed it!

Thanks!

-Janelle


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