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Review:LightLeviosa5443 says:
Hi! Review swap is so much fun!

I really enjoyed reading this chapter. It was interesting, and different and I honestly had no idea what to expect.

As I read I really found myself wanting to know more and more about the main character and who she is, where she's from, why she's there. I think that the way you described her pain and thinking of emotional pain to get away really made everything so much more believable.

I think the strongest part of the story was the ending, she's walking through the manor and panicking because she must be on her way to die, now. And then she realizes that she's supposed to sit at this table with all of these people. And then she see's her classmates and she's ashamed. What's even better is when the woman comments about her looking like she's been tortured and I actually got a chill down my back.

I can't wait to find out what the holy grail is in this story, and what's going to happen now.

Great read! Thanks for the review swap!

xoxo LL

Author's Response: I am soo sorry that this is so late!

Very happy that you liked this because I had quite a few reservations because I thought it might just be way to intense for a first chapter, but it's good that you hopefully thought otherwise!

I hope you read on!

Thank you for the lovely review :)


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