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Review:maraudertimes says:
I can't believe I missed this update!
Hit me in the face with a digital frying pan next time please!

Anyways, this was SUPER AWESOME!

I totally got what James was doing when he was getting her angry, but I totally agree with Clara: not cool James. Not cool. Some of those were really personal and I felt bad for Clara (even if I knew it was for a good cause).

But wow! Clara is getting *really* good at wandless magic! I hope she kicks some serious Ivan butt in the future! Payback for his horrible ways!

The Fred/Alex (Fralex? Aled? I like Fralex) situation is so cute, and I could only dream of ever being in a relationship that perfect and sweet!

And poor Clara with the rib situation, although yay for Clara because honey, James seems smoking hot! Does anyone have a fire extinguisher because he's going up in flames!(please realize that the mental image in my head is making me think this and not that I'm in love with a fictional character... which I'm totally not!... well I'm not 'in love' with James, I just like him... ow darn it, I'm in love with your version of James Sirius Potter, delish abs and all!)

But yes. Thank you for the description of the abs. It made me happy :)

And it was so sweet hot James helped Clara with her ribs, and how she leaned against his shoulder! I had major Clames squeals!

And then the dueling was perf! Amazing, your description of it was superb, I just honestly loved it! Especially when it was Clara and James fighting and then there was a little Clames moment at the end! So cute!

(Although, I was expecting him to knock her down and be lying on top of her and then they would kiss and Fred would have cleared his throat or something like that to disturb my perfect Clames moment, but no biggie!... a cute Clames moment will happen soon though, right? RIGHT?!)

Anyways, I've just realized that you're setting me up for intense heartbreak because I just remembered what the premise of the story is through the first chapter and: HOW DARE YOU MAKE ME FEEL THE CLAMES FEELS AND THEN RIP IT AWAY. I mean, even though you haven't done it yet: HOW DARE YOU PLAN SUCH A THING! I SHALL REVOLT! yOU SHALL SEE ME IN THE STREETS WITH SIGNS PROCLAIMING 'CLAMES 5EVAH!' 'I

Author's Response: Oh my gosh wow!! I read what you wrote here and in the personal message btw so don't worry! I don't even know you but I love you for loving my story so much and always leaving reviews 8)

Don't worry, all I ever think about is this story and I'm on winter break until the 27th so I hope to get more out ASAP!

As far as Ivan goes, all I can say is keep waiting for it...haha and I love that you're giving names to the ships. Fralex it is! I love their relationship too. It's based off of my best friend and her boyfriend. They're so cute together it makes me wanna die!

And it's okay, I'm in love with James too! I just had to throw in some good Clames action this chapter. I'm so glad you liked the dueling too! I was nervous because I had it so planned out in my head and I was worried all the details might make it too bland to read but yay! Perhaps a moment like the one you imagined will be in a future chapter...

I don't want you to read this story and feel sad about Clames!! Just remember that everything is not always as it seems. Ahh you gave such a long amazing review I'm hoping I covered everything. Thank you so much for your reviews throughout the story and more will be up soon!

-jazzercise


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