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Review:Lululuna says:
Hello! :) Here for Day 12 of the 12 Days of Reviewing Challenge!

It's been way too long since I read this story! This chapter actually made me giggle so much and was really witty. Poor, poor Lorcan, in his defense I think the sight of all those Darlenes would frighten me as well! :P

You actually kill me with all of the terrifying descriptions. I was so frightened of the thing he was seeing, and then realized it was just Lucy. She seems so maniacal and cruel, and my favourite part would have to be when she informed him that he'd been cured an hour ago. And then when she used Rennervate on him because she wanted him awake for the torture, that just seemed so vicious. Lucy sort of played up the idea of the mad scientist or cruel doctor only caring about their experiments and it was really hilarious, and I enjoyed the ginger references as well.

The descriptions of Darlene, especially when her legs poked out of the trunk, made me giggle as well. Just her name was so perfect, and the idea of all of them trying to convince Lorcan to come live with them was so funny! The thought of using a boggart here was so genius - on your part and Lucy's.

I love how indignant Lorcan is that he doesn't want romance, and how the others just can't figure out that all he wants is to play Gobstones and stay away from women. Poor guy!

This was wonderful, I really enjoyed laughing my way through the chapter. Well done! :D

Author's Response: Hi!!

Witty?! Me?! Thanks!! I'm really not witty in real life, but this story brought out a side of me that was previously unknown. I definitely felt sorry for Lorcan throughout this whole chapter, but it was worth it--he needed to grow up.

Oh no! I didn't mean to frighten you! However, I'm glad that you were. Lucy is definitely, definitely a sadist, which was an incredibly fun thing to write. She's much different from Cassiopeia because she's actually smart and her physical appearance isn't very intimidating, but DANG! She became the stuff of nightmares without my permission (and I'm okay with that).

Darlene. I have no earthly idea where I pulled that name from, but it seemed to fit. The leg thing was so silly--boggarts are easily defeated if you can face your fear, and I hope that all of the goofy things that the multiple Darlenes did showed that. Genius?! Thanks so much!!!

Yeah, Lorcan is no casanova. I'd like to imagine that when he grows up, he'll live alone with cats. ;)

Thanks again for your awesome review!

~UnluckyStar57


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