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Review:mcdash says:
Oooh, I got so excited when I saw this story updated! I've been (not) patiently waiting since the last chapter was posted. But enough of me talking about chapter updates and excitement, let's get on with the actual review.

Alright, so I loved the opening with The Ronan Daily. There are never enough stories with gossip publications in them, so The Ronan Daily is one of my favorite parts of this story. I think she makes a good point in that Albus and Aaliyah aren't appearing very couple-y right now. I would personally love to see a scene where the hash out the awkward parts of their relationship and try to make it look more presentable/cute/relationship-y. Plus, that means more interactions between Albus and Aaliyah. ;)

Okay, so I needneedneed to know the whole backstory with Fred and Aaliyah! I can figure out hints from Fred's confrontation with Albus, and it's making the wait for the full story even harder. I'm not sure how I feel about Fred right now, because I like that he's trying to protect both Aaliyah and Albus, but he's still coming off a bit selfish for wanting to take Aaliyah away from Albus. Of course, not every character is perfect.

Speaking of other confrontations, Gabby and Rose are perfect. Rose's list is really intriguing, and I'd love to see what else Albus puts on the list. And Gabby being protective over Aaliyah = perfect.

Overall, this was a fantastic chapter! You write such perfect interactions between all the characters, and I still feel as if there's level of mystery over all the character's histories. It keeps me coming back for more, which is great. Loved it! :)

Author's Response: Aww, I'm glad you got excited. Haha, I do that a lot too, patiently waiting for updates on stories that is.

I honestly didn't plan on the Ronan Daily being there. It was a spur of moment idea. Gossip publications are always fun to read so I get what you mean. You are right. Charlotte does make a point. Though, Aaliyah and Albus should be more careful since Ronan will get meaner and tougher on them. And there are never too many interactions between the two. ;)

I'm saving the back story for later. Haha, I'm evil, aren't you? Keeping you waiting like that. :P I'm actually planning to reveal it soon, like in the next few chapters. Fred is... complicated. That's all I can say at this point. He isn't a bad guy but he isn't necessary the best character. He has a good heart, though.

Rose... I'm having a lot of fun writing her. She has her insecurities and her disapproval is just another obstacle for Aaliyah and Albus. I'm happy you liked Gabby. Usually people write the male as being the protective one so I switched it up a bit.

Thank you so much for taking the time to review. It means so much and you are so SWEET. Like honestly, I don't deserve this much kindness. :P But thank you. And the interactions are really fun to write so I'm ecstatic that you like them.

And the next one is coming soon. I have it typed up. I just need to edit it.

~Sama :D

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