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Review:UnluckyStar57 says:
Hi! I'm here for the Twelfth Day of the Twelve Days of Reviewing. :)

I loved this look at post-war Pansy Parkinson. It is obvious that the war treated her very badly--and it was no less than she deserved, calling out in the Great Hall against Harry Potter. But here, she is so vulnerable to the pressures of the world around her. Her edges, as she says, are jagged. She is broken and nothing will save her.

Pansy is a confused person. She loved Draco, but he left her. She was loyal to the beliefs of Slytherin House, and now Slytherins are probably looked down upon. She is supposed to be a grown-up, but she never had a chance to grow up. That's why this portrait of Pansy is so wonderful--I can see how desperate she is to know what she needs to do with her life, but she just can't see any way out of her situation.

This was written very beautifully. I really enjoyed reading it. Happy Twelve Days of Reviewing! :)

~UnluckyStar57

Author's Response: Hi there!

I'm so glad that you liked the different look and feel to her about her because I think in a way it was good for her because it allowed her to re-evaluate her life and hopefully for the better so she can maybe save herself.

I'm really glad that you picked up on the confusion as well as her fear of the future because not that many people did. She really is a desperate person but then everything she clinged onto has left her now, so it's no wonder she was like that.

Thank you for such an amazing review, I'm glad you liked it so much!

-Kiana


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