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Review:patronus_charm says:
Hey Charlotte! I donít think Iíve read anything of yours before so I decided to use the last day of the 12 days of reviewing to do so!

I really loved this story, it was just so unique in the aspects it covered and Alicia was such a great narrator it made it even more enjoyable. I loved the little hints about being an oblivator because, like Alicia, I always thought that the job would be rather fun and glamorous and then felt a little bad for her when it wasnít quite what she thought it would be.

Alicia was really lovely too because it was great catching up on her because she seems to be forgotten in fan fiction which is a little sad because I always did enjoying reading her in the books. She was such a relatable character too, I think it was the little moan about the course costing a lot of money but not really being worth it which showed that to me. :P

Speaking of the course, it was nice to bump back into old Twycross again, and though itís a bit late, it fitted with the theme of the house cup really well!

I loved your description of when Alicia began to travel to other countries because it was so vivid and pretty it really made me want to visit all of those places. This was a great one-shot, Charlotte, and made me all nostalgic about the Cup :P

-Kiana

Author's Response: Hey Kiana!

I'm so sorry for the horrible lateness of this response, but I hope you know how much this review means to me! Thank you so much for leaving such a lovely review :)

I'm really glad that you found it unique, because I definitely really strive to do that in my stories. Yep, I definitely think it's really interesting how one's perception of a job/anything is sometimes completely wrong! :P I'm also really glad you liked Alicia - I completely agree about her being kind of forgotten in fan fiction - she really does feel like a minor character even though her presence in the books is fairly noticeable!

Haha, Twycross.. it was quite amusing writing him because I felt like I could relate to having frustrating teachers :P Thank you so much for all the kind words Kiana - I really appreciate the review!

- Charlotte


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