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Review:patronus_charm says:
Hey Emily! Here for the 12 days of reviewing!

To be fair, I didnít know what to expect from this story but I really loved it and the whole story was a lot funnier than I predicted it to be :P I think the great thing was how though this was a Marauders story it wasnít focused upon them which was a nice change, though the brief cameo from James and Cho Changís ancestor did make me chuckle a little.

I loved Jasmine! She was such a fun character with the way she was giggling about Walker having his first kiss ruined, drifting off in an important meeting like that and wanting Peeves to stay. It was just so different to how I usually see her as I but I really loved her for that because added such a nice freshness to her characterisation.

All the other canon characters such as Dumbledore and Filch were really great too with Dumbledore being pleased about the small moment when it looked as if the plan was going to be pulled off. Of course he would support mischief making and I think thatís why I love him so much. Then there was Filch in the background not being too happy about this in the slightest but in a way thatís what makes Filch with his grumpiness.

This was a fun chapter and Iíll try and be back for some more!

-Kiana

Author's Response: Kiana! I couldn't get to the last two days of the Reviewing Challenge because school started, but I'm glad you could, for obvious reasons. :P

Ahaha yeah, this was my forst piece here so it's a lot fluffier than anything else I've written so far. I'm so glad you liked it and that you found it funny, I was wondering whether the humour was actually funny or not, haha. I'm too scared to actually write the Marauders, but I put this in their era so that they can make a brief cameo. I'm glad you enjoyed their mentions here!

Bahaha yes, I'm so glad you liked her! She is very fun and Walker is a bit of a pain, so her giggling about his ruined first kiss would be appropriate. I'm so glad you found her fresh and that you think she was characterised well, I was super nervous about that when I submitted this.

Ah, Dumbledore and Filch were okay? I'm so glad to hear that! Writing Dumbledore is so hard for me and I'm so happy that you think he was characterised well, and Filch as well. Dumbledore would support mischief-making, and Filch has a chronic case of the grumps, so hehe I enjoyed writing him.

Thank you so much for this lovely review Kiana, it made my day! :D


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