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Review:MissesWeasley123 says:
Hello! Here for our review swap and the 12th day of the 12 Days of Reviewing.

So this. I'd been meaning to read all of the mention for the Unexpected Voice challenge, and Reg is always so forgotten. I think the most brilliant thing about this piece has to be that Mary Cattermole is Mary McDonald which equals my mind blow. It just makes so much sense for that to be, and what's even funnier is that Harry's mum's friend kissed Ron (in the movies at least) which is slightly disturbing and yet hilarious haha.

The five months must've been brutal. But you paced the story wonderfully and the sense of loss he was feeling.

Potterwatch plays such a significant role is soothing the Trio, and I liked how it soothed Reg as well, to know she was alive and everything. It was sweet to see his family listening to her and that moment was just so beautiful. You really painted their relationship with such care and it was honestly amazing.

This entire piece was a combination of originality and writing prowess, because you truly have an extraordinary quality of taking missing moments and writing one shots on them. Definitely write more if you have time.

Happy New Year!

Author's Response: Wahh, thank you, this is such a lovely review!!! So many compliments and I just I ajsdkjfaj. Ok - will try to type coherently now.

I'm so glad you liked Mary Cattermole as Mary Macdonald. Hahaha, I had never even considered that - Harry's mum's friend kissing Ron - that's so funny. And yes a little disturbing :p

It's so great to hear that the story is paced well. I know the beginning was kind of glossed over and the end more drawn out, but I'm really happy to hear that that worked with the focus on loss.

When I read DH I thought Potterwatch was the coolest thing, and writing a second-war fic I had to throw it in :D I'm so glad you liked that moment when they were listening to her, and that you liked the portrayal of Reg and Mary's relationship! I have to say it was so far out of my comfort zone as I'm not married and don't have children and haven't been separated from a significant other by war/Voldemort etc. so I am so glad to hear they came across well!

Aah, you are too nice! Thank you so much, it means a lot to hear that this was original and I'm so flattered at your compliments on my writing. Thanks so much for the review, and happy New Year!!!


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