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Review:patronus_charm says:
Hey Grace! Here for the 12 days of reviewing and yay for chocolate loving because I love it too and eat way too much!

I really loved the premise for the story because Harmony sounds like a really fun character with her chocolate addiction and then denying it. :P It sounds like something I would end up doing. :P Another thing that I really liked about her was how relatable she was because she didnít have any airs or graces and was really down to earth and fun which is always a great thing to come across in a story.

I loved all the Wotter clan (well, it was a lot of them :P) popping up here because it made me chuckle. Iíve never seen Dom, Rose and Roxanne all hang out with the same person before and I really liked that change because it was unexpected and will make the story a refreshing read from her being Roseís best friend and dating Albus because I saw a little love interest with Sam, so it will be great to see how thatís followed up.

This was a really great and fun start and I hope thereís more soon!


Author's Response: Kiana, you're back again! To be perfectly honest, this story was sort of spontaneous. I was eating chocolate one day and started thinking about how people love chocolate so much and how much fun it would be to base a story on chocolate.

I remember trying to think of a way to make Harmony a more memorable character or maybe a little bit special but then it occurred to me that it didn't have to be that way. There was nothing wrong with her having a chocolate addiction but being otherwise normal (the chocolate addition is enough of a quirky trait).

The whole friends with Rose and dating Albus thing has been done an awful lot, hasn't it. Sam is actually a girl but it's not a bad idea of having a little bit of romance between her and Harmony.

There will definitely be more I just don't know how soon.

Thank you again for the review Kiana!

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