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Review:marauderfan says:
How mean of Lily :( What an absurd rumour too, I can't believe people actually believed it. Though I guess there were stupider ones about Harry at certain points during the books so I guess there's no limit as to what a bunch of teenagers at a small isolated wizarding school will believe. If school ever gets boring at least there's gossip to fall back on! :p

I really like the angle of Ellie being a werewolf, and that you've gone in depth with describing her condition and what it does to her, how sick she is all the time, how she can feel the wolf waking up a few days before the full moon. I'm so glad you decided to elaborate on the daily-life part of being a werewolf in addition to the full moon part (which I imagine will appear at some point in the story as well).

James is sweet in this chapter, despite how silly he is, he's definitely quite caring. I wonder how he's going to react when he finds out that the girl he's fancied all this time is a werewolf.

I want to keep reading but it's really late at night and I'm about to fall asleep. So until next time :)

Author's Response: The original rumour was that Ellie was sleeping with her teachers and I got in trouble over that (both my fiance and the moderators) This rumour is less significant, but works. I don't even remember what it is...? Oh well, not re-reading it! It's too embarrassing.

Wow thanks, yeah I hoped to capture werewolf anxieties and such. I think it'd be incredibly difficult, for sure. Sorry my responses are such rubbish. I really appreciate your feedback!

Sleep well! Don't worry about reading the rest. It's so embarrassing


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