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Review:MissesWeasley123 says:
Hello, here for day 11 of the 12 Days of Reviewing. I love getting to read your work, and you seem to have a bit up of everything!

I thoroughly enjoyed the flashbacks in this. It's so hard to write at times, but your writing style is brilliant. I was never lost, and knew exactly what was happening. The flow was never disrupted which is always a nice thing. So kudos to you for that!

AND UM, NARCISSA A KILLER WHAT. I must admit this is the reason I chose to read this fic, because it seemed so unreal for her to do that. In all the fics I've read, Narcissa has always been a cool woman, who's cheeky but really kind as well (these are of course, Draco/Astoria stories) but this side of her was so different!

You had some really chilling moments that were definitely detailed. You characterized Narcissa perfectly, letting the darkness in her be justified.

All in all, a truly chilling story, and thanks for a great read!

Author's Response: Hi again, Nadia! And thank you - I do try to be versatile with my writing ^.^

Oooh, thank you very much! I'll give you a tip: when I wrote this one-shot, I wrote all of the 1998 sections in one sitting, then went back and wrote all of the 1972 sections afterwards. It helped me to maintain a consistent pace without accidentally slipping in a few plotholes :D

This was actually written for a challenge that got taken down, where I was given the prompt to have Narcissa kill someone in the Forbidden Forest, and I could choose from a list of weapons. The ring made me think of Dumbledore and the Horcrux ring, which made me think of how Narcissa could've used it. I'm really pleased you liked this portrayal of her!

Thank you so much for the lovely reviews, Nadia; they're very much appreciated! ♥


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