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Review:TheSortingHat says:
This review is for Day 10 of the 12 Days of Reviewing.

That was adorable. Simple, lovely, and utterly adorable. I thought that you managed to capture two relationships perfectly and concisely--Remus and Tonks' romantic love, and Remus and Sirius' brotherly affection. I thought that you really captured the struggle Lupin feels between his feelings for Tonks and his desire for what is best for her, all mixed together with his sorrow over Sirius' death. Seriously, using the star was an absolute stroke of genius.

I thought that stylistically, the story flowed well and conveyed everything it needed to fully and concisely--often, it can be difficult to accomplish both of those at once. This story was truly heart-warming, and would bring a smile to the face of anyone who doesn't have a heart made of cardboard. So props to you!

--TheSortingHat

Author's Response: Wooo! I love reviews!

Thank you so much! I'm so glad that you thought it was adorable, I did love writing cute Remus and Tonks so I might have to write some more. I'm so glad that you thought I had captured Remus and Tonks so well, that has made me so happy, I get so worried writing canon characters because I'm scared that I won't do them justice.

Aw you are seriously amazing! I wanted to include the star without making it cliche, I imagined that Remus spent so much time keeping an eye on the night sky because of the moon that he would always look for Sirius's star, in fact I could imagine him doing that with Sirius when Sirius was still alive.

Thank you so very very much! Your review is heart-warming, your review has given me the biggest smile.

Thank you for the brilliant review. :D


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