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Review:TheSortingHat says:
This review is for Day 10 of the 12 Days of Reviewing.

Wow! This story is off to a really good start--I think that Selene could be a fascinating character. She has such an interesting and unique family dynamic, yet she seems ultimately quite down-to-earth. I'm curious to see how she ends up in Slytherin, since she seems so set on Gryffindor. But the Sorting Hat (I almost feel like I'm talking about myself in the third person, what with my username and all) never makes a mistake, so I'm sure she'll reveal her natural cunning! :)

I'm also intrigued to see if that "skinny, brown-haired boy" might come into play more in later chapters--Lupin is my favorite Marauder, and I'd love to see him interacting with a Slytherin of all people in his early years at Hogwarts (or perhaps, even falling in love with one...?).

Anyway, props to you for such a solid first chapter; I'm eager to see where you take the story from here!

--TheSortingHat

Author's Response: The next chapter doesn't quite show her scene with the Sorting Hat, but it will certainly be something that will be addressed later. Haha, I didn't noticed your username until the end and it did seem like you were talking in the third person. But I do that all the time anyway.
Yeah, Remus will come into play in later chapter as a friend definitely (though some of the Marauders don't quite approve of this friendship). As for the falling in love, let's just say that I have always been a big fan of Nymphadora/Remus as a pairing. Sorry if that's a let down. But that doesn't mean their won't not be any romance but it won't be the main focus of the story. It's more about something Selene discovers and figured out that can save people.
Everyone who reviews always talk about her family and they will play a role but not a major one at the beginning. The first few chapters are mainly just fillers that lead up to something else and her family won't come in until a bit later.
Selene is quite a down-to-earth person. I made her a Slytherin because she is an ambitious and determined person, but another way I would describe her is that she is like a Hufflepuff with a severe mean streak that can rear its head when she is quite mad, which is another reason she is a Slytherin
Anyways, thanks for reviewing and if you really are interested, my next chapter is in the queue and waiting to be validated. :)


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