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Review:TheSortingHat says:
This review is for Day 10 of the 12 Days of Reviewing.

Whoa! That beginning really came out of nowhere and piqued my interest--I'm really intrigued to see where this story goes. I like the idea of Draco being "indebted" to the Golden Trio--that seems quite novel to me, I've never really seen it in any Dramione before. I also love the irony that in only a few short years, the Golden Trio and Draco have essentially switched places socially; I think that could have some interesting ramifications.

My only caution would be that you make sure to take the development of Draco and Hermione's feelings slowly--I think that one of the ways that Dramiones can feel unrealistic is when the pair's feelings change too quickly. However, I think that this story shows a lot of promise, and I'm excited to see where you take it.

Hopefully we'll get to see Lucius in chapters to come; I'm interested to see how he's managed to gain power back so quickly!

--TheSortingHat

Author's Response: thank you. This will be a long, slow developing fan-fic and you will def. see the relationship grow slow, but strong. And thank you so much for your review.

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