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Review:TheSortingHat says:
This review is for Day 10 of the 12 Days of Reviewing.

I really liked the way that you strung different moments together, they really worked together to create an impression of the relationship Charlie and Tonks had. I particularly liked how Charlie saw her as herself after she died; it was a touching scene and an interesting one--I'd never thought about what she might look like naturally before!

There is definitely some ambiguity there, about exactly what Charlie still felt for Tonks, but that seemed intentional and I thought it worked.

Overall, well-structured and well thought-out. Keep writing!

--TheSortingHat

Author's Response: Hi there! Thanks for reviewing!

I've always been interested in Charlie Weasley, just because he's the only Weasley that has never had any focus, the one in the background... but I think that working with dragons in Romania is super cool and wanted to explore his backstory and character etc.

And I'm interested in the magic behind metamorphmagi - what did they look like when they were born? Can female metamorphmagi turn into males? Hmmm.

Thank you again for reviewing!


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