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Review:patronus_charm says:
RRT!

Ah this was so sad, Iím not even joking I felt as if I wanted to cry throughout the whole thing and I had something stuck in my throat and now I feel as if I need to go and eat some chocolate to go and combat the sadness. I think it was the tone of your story which really pulled it off because even though it had sadness seeping throughout, it was a subtle sort if that makes sense and because the way it was so understated it made it even sadder.

I donít even know where to start! The mentions of Andromeda looking after Ted, George and Ron now running the shop, Fred and Terryís funeral. Gah, I just couldnít cope! The mentions were thrown in really unexpectedly because there were moments of normalcy which was really nice and then bam a reminder that someone died and cue me choking up.

The characterisation here was really great with the way Neville had now stepped up to the role of being leader, Arthur and Molly being all muted and quiet and the same with Ginny too, but Hermione still trying to make sure that everything was alright and not too many people were breaking. Seriously, this is some of the best post-war characterisation Iíve seen in a long while.

Ok, this was a really brilliant first chapter so Iím going to carry on reading and review when I can!

-Kiana

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing:)

I'm still getting used to the whole writer thing, and it's really bizarre because the fact that I made you want to cry put a huge smile on my face. And that isn't how I normally feel about making people sad.

Aww, I'm... glad... that you were saddened by the constant reminders of death...
Okay, wow, I sound so morbid.

I've gotten mixed responses to Neville's character, so I'm glad you liked it.

You make me blush!
You used the words best and brilliant. Ahhh, I'm blushing and smiling and ahhh thank you thank you:D I see that you've left multiple reviews and I'm gonna go read them and respond and (hopefully) :D


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