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Review:HollyStone73 says:
Unsurprisingly, this is exceptional. As I am sure that I have told you before, you have a gift with words and this story is further proof of this.

I absolutely love the way that you captured Hermione's passion and wisdom so perfectly. Her speech patterns and mannerisms are spot on. Her getting a job at the ministry in Magical Law is so perfect for her.

The attention to detail throughout this chapter is impeccable and so well thought out. The interactions between Hermione and the Wizengamot are so believable and spirited that I can easily picture them actually occurring.

I LOVE that you have written Albus as you have and referred to him as a protgege. What little JK wrote about him in DH, we are left to presume a lot about him, but you seemed to have captured his intuitive and pensive nature.

Furthermore, the idea of Hermione being behind the effort to rehabilitate werewolves while very typical of what she would so, the backfiring of it with Greyback just seems horrible. I look forward to reading on to see what happens!

Super great job as always. You continue you amaze and inspire me! (I will now cease to ramble on and finish this review.) :)

Author's Response: Hi, there! Thank you so much for all of the kind words!

I was imagining Hermione in the prime of her career in this. She's been with the Magical Law Department for a long time at this point, her children are grown and there's really nothing to prevent her from fully applying all of that talent and experience. I'm glad you like the way she talked and acted. I tried really hard to make her perfect.

Details are really important, I think. They sell a story every bit as much as the plot and dialog.

Albus never seemed like an Auror to me in his brief appearance at the end of Deathly Hallows. None of Harry's kids seemed like Auror material, really. I'm not a big fan of stories where half of the Next Gen kids wind up being Aurors, Unspeakables, etc.

Hermione has found herself in quite a predicament here. The law that she championed is about to set a monster loose. Let's hope she finds a way to save the day in chapter 2. ;)

I'm really pleased that you enjoyed the story! Thanks for reading and reviewing!


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