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Review:kenpo says:
Here for review number 2! I loved the prologue, so I'm really excited about this.

Squealing Brat. Right from the start, we've got a clear tone of the narration.

I'm really curious to see how Morgaine and Godric's relationship will evolve. And where Salazar comes into the picture.

This writing is really fantastic.

Thaaat's where Salazar comes in. Wow. Really intriguing.

Okay. Wow. This is fantastic. This review is so lame, but there's really not much for me to say. At times, it was a little confusing to me, but I tend to be very easily confused, so I'm not much help there. I also don't really mind confusion, as long as the story is still enjoyable and man, this one is.

I said it before, the writing style is absolutely amazing. It fits with the time period without feeling forced... Really, this is fantastic.

The plot is already picking up, and it seems like you've really thought it all the way through (or at least, you're great at giving that illusion). The writing as direction and focus and it's really just amazing.

Author's Response: Yup, I have actually thought out most of the story. I know the major points, what is lacking is just how to get from A to B, but I'm working through that :)

I am really happy you like the story, not very many people read Marauder Era stories on this site, which I think is a real shame, because I've found that that Era is a real writing boost :)

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