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Review:patronus_charm says:
Hey Tammi! Here for the 12 days of reviewing and Ronks is my OTP so I couldnít resist :D

Ah this one-shot was so great because it covered so many emotions in so few words and it was such a great read because I thought you pulled off this pairing really well.

Tonks was wonderful with the way she was sort of bullying Remus into marrying him :P I really loved how you characterised her as it really reminded me of how she appeared in the books, and it was just pulled off so well. I could spend all day gushing away about it because she just made me laugh and she worked so well with your Remus and it was great because she provided the lighter moments needed for this story.

Remus was really excellent too :P Even though I was a little annoyed with him going down the usual path of him saying that he couldnít marry Tonks and all that jazz, it worked well with his natural characterisation, and the way you kept the two of them so in character was really great. I really enjoyed his narration for another reason too because, unlike Tonks, he was a lot more aware of his surroundings and paid attention to them which was a nice interlude with the dialogue.

The comments about Sirius were really great even if they did make me feel as if I wanted to tear up from time to time :P I think it was the just line about the star almost twinkling at him which got to me because I rarely see that closeness portrayed between them in a non-Wolfstar way, so it was lovely to see it in a purely platonic way too.

I liked the ending because though we could pretty well guess what happened it still left a nice bit of curiosity over how Tonks finally persuaded Remus. This was such a great one-shot, Tammi, and Iím so glad I read it!

-Kiana

Author's Response: Heya Kiana!!

You have seriously made my day so much with this amazing review! I honestly can't stop smiling when I read it.

Cheeky little Tonks, she knows what she wants and she knows that Remus just needs some gentle shoving in the right direction. :P

Awww I could spend all day gushing about this wonderful review that I love!

Oh Remus, he needs to stop feeling sorry for himself and accept the love he deserves!

I'm so very glad that you liked my characterisations of them, I was worried that I wasn't going to write them in a believable way, so to hear that I have has made me so happy.

I wanted to put Sirius in there, I imagined that he really wanted them to get together, I think he's a definite Tonks/Remus shipper. :D Awww don't tear up, although I'm sad that Sirius is gone, but he'll always be in the stars. *hugs*

Thank you so very much Kiana for your wonderfully amazing review!!! :D


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