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Review:TheHeirOfSlytherin says:
Hey, it's Sam, here to review your entry for my Supernatural Creature Challenge.

Newt and dragons. It was such a cool story. I don't really read stories about Newt Scamander, mostly because I give up looking after a while, so if they're here I've missed them. So, I was very excited when I read the summary and knew I was going to read a story about him. Because of this, it's very easy to see him acting and sounding as you write him - he's very... aware of his crazy plans, which I like very much. Like, he knows what he wants and he goes for it, even if it's mad.

Newt tried not to think. It interfered with him being nuts. - My favorite line in the story. It was so perfectly awesome.

I'm very glad his conscience caught up with him at the end and he let the baby dragon go. It was such a sweet ending to this, I loved it. And I agree, mums are always right. They know everything.

The manager should definitely be fired!

This was a great entry! Thank you for entering!

Sam.

Author's Response: Hey Sam!

Newt is a pretty obscure character to write about but extremely fun, nevertheless. I've only read one other story revolving around Newt a long time ago. I've even forgotten its name. Anyway, when I saw the opportunity to include Newt I grabbed it. And voila :)

It was important to convey that Newt despite all his crazy plans has a heart. I'd like to think that it was this perfect combination of his ambition and conscience that made him the world famous magizoologist he is today.

I'm really glad that you liked the ending. My mother spent quite a few days rubbing this in my face, but it was totally worth it. I'm just grateful to her wonderful insight that I'm sure every other mother possesses. It's gotten me out of a few nasty situations.

For some reason I always take pleasure in writing these nasty characters, just like the manager. He was so comical in my mind, the stereotypical power-hungry man.

Thank you so much not only for this review but for the amazing challenge you created. I had a lot of fun writing this story and I hope that you had an equal amount of fun reading it!


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