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Review:kenpo says:
Hey, here with your requested review! I'm in the mood to do a rolling review (is that what they call them? When I just write as I read it?) Hopefully you're okay with that, because all three might be like that :)

I was excited when I saw this because it's an awesome Era to write it.

The village burned.
Wow, what a powerful start.

Your use of the word slaughter reminds me of the way Augustus described the assassination of Julius Caesar. I'd be surprised if that was intentional... but... yeah.

Hollow cry... subdued whisper... amazing.

Ooo. What baby is this? You've got me hooked. This is so good.

OUCH. Killed her. Ouch.

THIS WAS SO GOOD. This review isn't terribly useful... but holy moley, this story was good.

Your writing style was entirely appropriate for the Era. This was a really quick chapter, but I think it fit really well.

Really, just wow. This was an amazing first chapter. I loved the end.
I'll be back for your other two reviews:)

Author's Response: Hahaha your review made me laugh! I love it :D Why haven't I ever left rolling reviews?! That has to change.

Anyway, I am glad you like the setting, and the writing style. I've found that my style is more suitable for this type of stories. I mean, imagine writing a, say, Scorpius/Rose and going like "For our love is doomed, cursed... Alas, we cannot be together." Yeah. It kinda sucks lol

And no, the word "slaughter" wasn't intentional in that sense, although it had been a real and proper slaughter the way the warriors had killed the villagers.

Thanks for reviewing :D

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