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Review:MissesWeasley123 says:
Hi! Here for day 9 of the 12 Days of Reviewing challenge!

This was tough to read, to be honest. Fred is so hard to read, especially fics like this with George. He's in denial, the reader (me) is in denial. It's crazy.

The parts in italics where like punches, one after another everytime. They hit me so hard, all of them. The blow your words had, especially those were so great. Punch after punch, after punch. I'll need tissues because it was that sad.

I love the way you write, and in the case of this piece, it was hauntingly magical. This made me want to curl up in a ball and cry my guts out:

Portable swamps. What on earth possessed Fred to think up that one? Brilliant idea - even Flitwick thought so - but why?

You always were the more inventive, the more daring, and the better twin.
-- That was tough to read. To see Geroge think of himself that way, and that he thought Fred was the better twin. Agonizing, in fact.

Great writing. You did a flawless job with this. The only bit of CC I'd have, is perhaps the 7 billion others. The war took place in 1998.. dunno if there were that many people on earth. But that's okay. It wasn't a big deal at all.

Nice job!

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