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Review:MissesWeasley123 says:
Hello, here for day 9 of the 12 Days of Reviewing! And may I say that this is brilliant. I don't think I have you favourited as an author, and am now questioning why. I have to change that, because the way you write is amazing.

Right, favourited. Now, onward:

So, whoa. This is breathtakingly amazing. That banner though. Tom Hiddleston and the actress for Minerva... ah. So pretty. But I'll talk about your writing. The way you write is like butter. So smooth, so slippery like Tom was slipping away from Minerva. This was chilling.

Minerva was so well done. The fact that she knew he was wrong but she loved him but he was already gone too far away from her. That, I think that was heartbreaking.

This line:

His fingers tighten.

That killed me. He.. he loves her too.. just not as much to give it up.. but it's there, the love, if only just. It made my heart ache and even as I touch about it it's hurting me because that was so tough. God, ugh.

Such amazing writing as always. Your stories manage to leave a great mark. Well done!

Author's Response: Thank you for stopping by to read and review! And thank you even more for the lovely compliments! ^_^

It's wonderful to hear that you like this portrayal of Tom and Minerva. Tom definitely is slippery, his words always meaning more than one thing at once, evading every question or insinuation.

What you've mentioned about Minerva is the aspect of this ship I enjoy writing most - her recognition that there's something wrong with him, something that can never change or be changed, and she has to let him slip away because of it. She'll never compromise, and she shouldn't have to.

I wouldn't say that Tom loves her, but he does see that he's losing something and he hates losing. So what he's expressing there is actually anger and frustration that she's resisting him.

Thank you again! It's always lovely to hear from you!


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