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Review:celadon says:
Team Bronze!

Aw, I can tell that this is going to be a lively, entertaining plot already! I love Audrey, with her foot in her mouth moments and standing up to Percy when he makes some foot in the mouth moments. While she comes across as ordinary, she has a certain security about herself which is very hard to find today. She's totally comfortable being Audrey.

Percy hasn't changed one bit. I've gotten quite annoyed with stories that completely revamp him into this chilled out person, practically eliminating any form of his past self. This makes him seem more realistic. I think, however, that he isn't as pompous as he is awkward around people. He isn't intentionally trying to show off, he's just unsure of how to strike up conversation. It makes him very much like Darcy from Pride and Prejudice, I think.

It's also nice to see George coping after Fred's death. Angelina and Verity all seem like cool character that I cannot wait to see more of. Draco, poor soul, seems to be so pitiful and meek at this point that I can't help feeling sorry for. Great chapter! I'm going to read more!

Author's Response: Yay! I'm glad that you're already excited about this as it means so much to me. Audrey certainly does have several foot in mouth moments but that's almost what makes her wonderful. I'm glad that you picked up on her being comfortable about herself because I really wanted to show that side to her because I've never really seen it in a story before so it was fun writing it here!

Haha, I know what you mean, but I think Audrey will make him a little more chilled out. I think hanging out with her will mean that being all tense and angry is impossible. I didn't mean to make the link between him and Darcy so obvious but admittedly that was my inspiration for him.

I'm so glad that you liked all the other characters because they all are very dear to me now! Thank you for such an amazing review, and I would love to know what you thought of the rest!

-Kiana


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