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Review:BookDinosaur says:
Hello Jenny! I'm here for the Ninth of the Twelve Days of Reviewing Challenge. :)

Wow. I don't even know how on earth I'm going to form a coherant review, because this was just amazing. It was so emotional (although that might be just me overreacting, because I've always been in denial over Fred's death) and just gahhh so sad. Even haunting. I'll need to go listen to Mike's podcast after this.

Fred's death was a subject that we never really had the time to explore in canon, but I'm really glad you decided to write a story out of this. The way you write is really emotive, and you don't get much more emotional than George after Fred's death. :( Why did Fred have to go and die?

I love your description throughout this piece, I could almost see everything, it was all so vivid and real. I loved this line especially: But you always end up losing a piece of a jigsaw. Or one bit is chewed up by a pet and then it doesnít fit together like it used to. It was such an amazing analogy for Fred and George's relationship and it just fit perfectly.

I really liked the italicised bits, where George was just desperately tlking to his twin, even though he knows that Fred's not there, can't hear him, won't reply. It shows so well how desparate he is for someone to talk to, or rely on, he needs someone to be there for him like Fred always was, and those bits just brought that out so well.

All in all this was an amazing oneshot Jenny, you really did a fantastic job here. Well done! :)

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