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Review:MissesWeasley123 says:
Hello! I'm here for day 9 of the 12 Days of Reviewing. I hope your finger's doing better!

And wow. First you go from fashionable Voldemort to this. To this. That is truly talent, Kiana. This was so well written, and I'm always amazed at anyone who can pull off doing the every word count challenge. It takes a lot of courage and effort to make something work.

I think the zero dialogue worked brilliantly in this. You focused on his twisted mind that was teetering on the edge of evil, and that was great. It made so much impact, and the little things were amazing.

I liked how this focused on young Tom Riddle. I think that is why I like this so much. He is young and you can feel that hint of excitement he's going through.

First person worked in this as well. We were able to have full view on Tom and how his mind worked. It was chilling to see him this way.

And this, obviously was amazing:

I can't wait until for the moment when I'm fully in control of my powers, then I can finally seek revenge.

This line showed immaturity and then his final descend into darkness. Really well done.

Nice piece Kiana!

Author's Response: *hides from you choosing some of my really old stuff* gah, hearing that you like this makes me want to cringe because it's always strange to think someone can :P

Haha, I like my different forms of Voldemort :P It's way more fun writing extremes like this and makes me want to maybe tackle Voldemort in love now :P

I'm glad that you liked the twisted aspect, at first I thought everyone would think I was psychopath for plotting people's murders and then I figured it's rather normal in FF :P

Yay for first person, I think almost with children it works best because their minds are so strange to us older beings we can only get them when we reach in like that.

Thanks for such the wonderful compliments Nadia, they mean the world to me!

-Kiana


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