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Review:patronus_charm says:
Hi, here for the RRB! Random note, but this is actually the first time Iíve seen Amy Adams as Rose, but I rather like it!

This was a really interesting first chapter, with a lot certainly happening in it with Rose waking up in the bed of Scorpius and then having to deal with angry cousins and all that jazz :P It reminded me of Delicate in a way which has always been a favourite of mine.

Rose is certainly a character and I really liked how I got a feel for her in this first chapter alone with her being a party sort of animal, liking the enemy and having a rather sharp tongue on her too. I can see with characteristics like that sheíll be bound to be getting up to a ton of adventures.

One thing that confused me was why they were all in the Slytherin common room. I gathered that there had been a party and Rose was a Gryffindor and Scorpius was a Slytherin but James and Albusí presence left me a little confused. Were they Slytherins too? Or did they wake up in someoneís elseís bed too? I would perhaps develop their presence a little more with some extra explanation, as it only needs to be a small line or two to do it. :)

I really liked the ending thought with admitting that she loved Scorpius and knowing that she went against her fatherís word by doing so :P Youíve got to love Scorose and seeing the suspense here with them was great. I canít wait to learn more about how the two of them ended up together.

Great first chapter!

-Kiana

Author's Response: Hi!

I'm glad you liked it! I definitely wanted it to start interesting, so I'm glad that's the impression you got! Oh gosh, that's such a compliment. Delicate was one of the first stories I read and is definitely one of my all-time favourites too! I'm literally blushing.

Good to know, I'll go clean that up. Albus is a slytherin, so he was just already in the dorm. James is a Gryffindor, Albus just went to go get him.

Thanks so much again!

xoxo Sarah


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