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Review:Remus says:
Hey, Amanda!

Perelandra here from the forums! :D Sorry that I've taken a while, life and all, but I'm here to review your story! :)

I have to say, I was very excited to read this one. Pack of Four has started on the whole Remus/Tonks deal so it's always nice to see how people perceive her.

In the books I felt she came across as this woman with a firmed reassurance of herself. This Tonks is different. She's nervous, a bit insecure of her abilities even though she a Metamorphmagus!! But I really liked that! It's refreshing to see a different perspective to a character that I've grown to really love.

What I enjoyed the most about this fic was that all of her emotions were very reletable because once or twice I've been in her position.

That bit about Charlie was cute, by the way! I wouldn't doubt for an instant about Arthur having muggle books. Possibly would read them to the kids when Molly wasn't there.

This was a short and sweet story and I kind of wanted more! Wanted to see the now confident Tonks take the job that she wanted, stalk Moody, possibly scare the old man. Haha! But I guess I'm going to settle with what you gave us. :)

I really liked this, Amanda! Thanks for giving me the link to read it!!!

Until next time!

--Rosie

Author's Response: Hey Rosie, thanks for coming by!

I'm glad Tonks felt slightly different but still in character. I think it would take some time and experience to build up that confidence we saw in the books, and Tonks clearly went through some challenges and dangerous, character-building situations between now and when she met Harry.

I'm glad you liked the emotion and the little details, like the anecdote about Charlie. This was just a little snapshot, but I'm sure you can imagine Tonks growing into the slightly clumsy Auror we love :)

Thanks for your kind review!

-Amanda


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