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Review:Inthenextlife says:
I'm glad Draco's finding some redemption :) Your characterization of Lucius is interesting- I like that you showed his vulnerable side. Lucius also was just too bad of a character to have a good life after the war, so I like it.

I also enjoy their fun sporty, summery activities, it seems like a fun day camp or something. I am however, a little considered that Draco is becoming something of a sugar daddy for Astoria ;)

My only thing with this chapter, is that I think you need to let Draco change throughout the story-- if he likes Astoria so much already, and is already cool with the orphans (the children of his war enemies) then his character doesn't really have anywhere to go from there, and there isn't a real basis for conflict between the two main characters.

Of course I haven't read the whole thing yet, so I'll have to see the last chapters before I can even be sure about that!

Overall, this was a really adorbs, heart-warmy chapter :)

-Madeline (handknittedsweaters)

Author's Response: Yeah, I think everyone agrees that Lucius shouldn't have a good life after the war. It's better that way.

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAH I havent laughed that hard in a long time! Sugar Daddy Draco ;) hahahahahahahahahaha but no, don't worry. He's not a sugar daddy for Astoria!

I wanted this story to be pure fluff and sweetness with not much conflict. I know that it doesn't make much sense but I wanted to write something very delicate and sweet and happy-ish because at the time I was sick of writing conflict so much. :p

Thanks for the review and the tips! :)

- Kayla :)


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