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Review:handknittedsweaters says:
D'awww! Little kids, they sound super adorable! I forgot to mention in the review on the first chapter, that I really like the idea of helping little kids out, its a plot idea I haven't read before and that's super refreshing!

I was a little confused about the part when you mention Daphne? Did he have a thing with her before? Is he secretly in love with Daphne? Maybe clarify that a little bit more, and if we're suppose to be wondering about that, then I feel like a small carrot to lead us to a conclusion would be very satisfying!

Rebekah
(Handknittedsweaters)

Author's Response: I always thought about the poor children who were orphaned and I'd never read about it so I thought I'd write it! Glad to know that you like it! :D

Nah, he was just really fancied her - kind of like a less obsessive Snape. I thought I'd made that clear but clearly not! I'll have to work on it for future projects and when I eventually edit this thing!

Thank you so much for the review and the tips!

- Kayla :)


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