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Review:handknittedsweaters says:
hello!

I'm sorry it took us so long to get back to you but we finally got here! Right off the bat, you love detail in your descriptions which makes things really interesting and makes me really feel the characters; one thing that stood out to me was the use of the word 'gulped' I just thought it was a little to strong of a word, I think swallowed would actually work just fine here. And one other thing, I was also confused about where Draco was, I like the element of mystery you create by using pronouns, but not knowing where they were was a little distracting. But great start :)

Rebekah,
(Handknittedsweaters)

Author's Response: Hello! It's okay! Sorry it's taken me two weeks to respond!

I purposely used the word gulped because it's more obvious when someone gulps than swallows, and I felt that Draco wasn't being that subtle. But thanks for giving me your opinion!

Thank you so much for your tips and the review! :)

- Kayla :)


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