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Review:Secret Santa says:
Hello again!

When I saw this was a Severus story I just had to check it out! He is such a vast and complex character that I have always found so fascinating but also very hard to write. But you managed it so beautifully! Such a great job in capturing the quintessence of this character!

Snape was always such a mystery because he was neither fully good nor fully evil. You could never tell with him, but I think that you walked us through the motions and his feelings and just his life with and without Lily with such grace, it was beautiful to read.

I liked how you included the bits and pieces from his life to create the full image. Like how he was there at the wedding, and then she died, also the flashbacks from school. If there was something I'd have to comment on it's the fact that this is a Snape POV story and he referred to James and Sirius as ... well, James and Sirius. I'm sure there is too much bad blood between them at this point for first names to even be an option. Also, I don't think Lily would have invited him to the wedding, but then again this is a matter of head canon. :)

I loved the ending. I remember when I first read DH and I saw the story behind Snape's hatred of Harry and the moment when the line "look at me" made so much sense. It was heartbreaking and it still is!

The descriptions and the flow of this story, the internal monologue, everything was so great! I can't find anything to comment on! Good job! Looking forward to reading more from you!

- Secret Santa

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