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Review:peppersweet says:
Hiya, here for day 8 of the 12 days of reviewing challenge! This was such a nice wee one-shot. I loved the casual absurdity of the Weasley's Christmas, like Roxanne accidentally throwing forks at Lucy, Albus levitating Lily and Hermione flawlessly performing the Heimlich manoeuvre on Ron. Bet he's glad he married her, eh?

I loved how much of a grudge Roxanne had on Henry Allen, seemingly for nothing. I know I get like that sometimes - I have terrifyingly short patience, especially when hungry - and I thought you portrayed Roxanne's frustration with him really well. Of course she fancies him! The ending was hilarious, when she just kinda throws insults at him then snogs him. I feel sorry for the poor boy. This line, I thought, summed up her inexplicable hatred of him perfectly: When all the dishes were clean, he wiped down all the counters and managed to remove the red food coloring stain that had remained for several years now. Roxanne thought about what it would look like if he suddenly went up in flames.

Roxanne's insistence on referring to Henry Allen by his full name at all times made me laugh - it reminded me of the podcast Welcome to Night Vale, where one character is always referred to as John Peters (you know, the farmer?)

Good job. Best of luck with the duel! ♥

Author's Response: Thank you! I also have short patience and have been known to get snappy when I get upset at people not going fast enough for me. :P I've heard of Welcome to Night Vale, and I keep meaning to listen to it but never do. Have fun in the 12 Days of Reviewing! :)

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