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Review:BookDinosaur says:
Hello! I'm here for the Eighth of the Twelve Days of Reviewing Challenge. :)

I really enjoyed reading this, I think you did a great job capturing the Christmas spirit in this oneshot.

Ah, you honestly made me feel so sorry for Sirius here! How he's never really experienced a proper Christmas makes me sad, Christmas is quite a big thing for me and my family haha. He was so adorable when he was worried about not fitting in or not being accepted, I couldn't help but want to hug him here. And I'm so glad that the Potters made them feel so welcome!

I really loved reading about everyone in Godric's Hollow, they were so warm and welcoming and I felt so good for Sirius when his fear slowly slipped away. And I'm so glad that Andromeda and his Uncle Alphard sent him gifts, it would help him feel at least a bit of that family love that Sirius really does deserve.

The Muggle Sweater tradition sounds so fun! How on earth did you think of the winning sweater idea?!

And ah, that last scene was so sweet! I'm so glad that the Potters were so warm and welcoming and I think Sirius would finally be put at ease after that. I really liked hearing about a few of their exploits in first year, how on earth did they get up to all that mischief?

All in all, I really enjoyed reading this fun little oneshot and I'm glad I had the chance to! Congrats on getting an entry into the Writers' Duel, and good luck!

Author's Response: Awww thank you so much! I loved writing this piece. I have always wanted to delve more into the relationship between James & Sirius and one-shots like this give me the perfect opportunity. I'm so glad you like this!

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