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Review:BookDinosaur says:
Hello! I'm here for the Eighth of the Twelve Days of Reviewing. :)

This was such an adorable little story! It was really fluffy and sweet, I enjoyed reading it.

The way you told this was amazing, Albus' voice was really childlike, but it wasn't too much. He sounded really young and stubborn, just like a little child would sound like. I really loved how you chose to tell us the story through Al's point of view, and I love your take on the prompt, sticking two little children under the mistletoe rather than having it as a romantic story. :)

I love how you characterised Al, you managed to write him so that he came off as a child, telling a child's story, and I find that really hard to do personally, so kudos to you for that!

I think the way you included little details like how Theo always smelled like bath time or how Uncle George says he's crazy helped to make the story more 3D and realistic. I really enjoyed the Theo smelling like bathtime, even as a kid Al bus was very anti-germs, haha!

I really like the idea of Harry telling stories and mimcking Hermione, that's sucha cute idea!

And ahh, that last comment from Harry made me chuckle. Give it time? So both parents are already anticipating their children will become a couple later on in life, ahahaha.

I really enjoyed reading this and I'm so glad I had the chance to! Congrats on getting an entry into the Duel, and good luck!

Author's Response: Hello!

I'm glad you think so, he was actually the easiest to write for me because he's the most like me and I have a lot of family of all ages to draw experience from. I'm so glad you like the take I took; it was my idea the moment I saw the prompt. :)

Yeah, Al is very anti-germs. He probably always will be. Theo is his favorite person because he smells like bathtime.

They don't like each other as children, so they mostly hope Al and Lexi will be friends one day, but Harry won't be against the idea of them being together. Theo, on the other hand... ;)

Thank you so much for leaving a review!


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