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Review:Infinityx says:
Hi there! I'm here for the eighth day of the 12 days of reviewing challenge.

This was such a beautiful story. I love your take on the prompt, and this was so unexpected. It was very cute and flowed so naturally. I think you've done a marvelous job on the characterization of little Albus. All those little details about how the people who hugged him gave him germs and Theo smelling like bath time were just so adorable!

I love how Albus says Lexi isn't an angel but just a big meanie, and then goes on to describe her appearance which looked just like an angel. It's so cute how he gets the mindset that girls are complicated at such a young age as well.

I really like the way you've written Lexi as well. She seems really bold and eager, especially with her use of a big word. :D

The way you've ended the story is so beautiful as well. Albus wiping the germs off his face followed by a small statement from adult Harry just gives the story a complete, sweet and unique feel.

This was so amazing, and I'm glad I read it. :)

- Erin.

Author's Response: Hi, Erin!

Albus is probably my favorite person to write, especially as a child, so I was so excited to be able to write him for the prompt. :)

I think he'll always see her as an angel, he just won't admit it, not even to himself. He sees her, but he doesn't like her, so he won't believe it. :D He listens to Harry, Harry says girls are complicated. :D

I'm so happy that you liked the end.

Thank you so much for leaving a review!

Sam.


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