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Review:BookDinosaur says:
Hello Kayla! I'm here for the Eighth of the Twelve Days of Reviewing.

I really enjoyed reading this! It had me laughing out loud, and there aren't really many stories here that make me do that.

I absolutely loved your Marauders, I think you characterised them all spot-on. I really enjoyed reading the banter that they said to each other in the Common Room, and I realy liked that you included Peter in the scene because a lot of people forget that Peter was a part of the Marauders, he must have been on good terms with them, and I'm glad you took that into account.

I really like how you opened the story, with the four of them just relaxing and bickering in the Gryffindor Common Room, it felt really Marauder-y and just perfect for the four of them.

Ah, I think you got the interations between Sirius and James just right as they were stuck under the mistletoe, it was so funny to see Sirius objecting and James just wanting to get out of the mistletoe and have the kiss over with, it was hilarious! Sirius accusing James of being in love with him was just the final touch, it was amazing, and their friends didn't seem to sympathise, ahaha!

The final interation between James and lily was perfect as well, you really captured Lily's mischeivous spirit perfectly as well, and I really enjoyed Lily making James work for any kisses and James promising that he will get that kiss one day, it was just so adorable! I think Lily and Mary are such a dynamic duo, they might give the Marauders a run for their money!

This was a lovely Chrismassy liitle oneshot, I really enjoyed reading it. Congrats on getting an entry into the Writer's Duel and good luck in it!

Author's Response: Hey, Emily!

haha, I'm glad that I could achieve that! :p

Every time I see a Marauders story without Peter in it I get so upset. He's a terrible person and all, but he was their friend. One they were all prepared to die for so I think he was a pretty good friend up to the moment where he joined the Death Eaters!

Thank you so much for all your kind compliments, I'm so glad you liked it! :D

- Kayla :)

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