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Review:JamesPotterReborn says:
Okay, I just first want to say that this story is amazing. You've set it up perfectly for the Harry Potter books. Everything from Daphne's obsession with lavender to Leena and Xeno dating, this is by far my favorite story on here. One thing I think you missed, though, is that in this chapter you mention how Snape has never really paid attention to McNair, but in Chapter 1 Lily is thinking about how Snape is friends a with Malfoy, Mulciber, and MCNAIR. This can be solved by editing Chapter 1 a little to change McNair's name to Avery, as in the chapter The Prince's Tale from The Deathly Hallows, Lily tells Snape that she detests Avery and Mulciber. Still, aside from that, this story is flawless.

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