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Review:kenpo says:
Hey! I'm here for the 'Claw battle!

The banner was gorgeous, firstly.

I loved this!! Tonks is usually portrayed as lathered with confidence, and I liked seeing that she's not always that way. The bits about her hair, and having to force it to be "normal" I found really interesting. You can't be "normal" to be an Auror, so she should just let her true colors (literally) show!

You decided to make her and Charlie friends! Love it! Charlie is one of my favorite characters, it was like a little wave from him!

Tonks' conversation with the little girl was great! I loved that!

I'm just repeating myself over and over... I'm not being very eloquent, but I don't have much to say other than how fantastic this was!

You very may well have missed 70% of the commas, but I wouldn't've noticed because I was just enjoying the story. Great job!!

Author's Response: Thank you! I also really love the banner :)

I agree; Tonks is best when she's being herself. It was nice to be able to write her in this moment when she realizes that, despite her ongoing nervousness.

Yeah, I know people sometimes write her and Charlie as a couple, but I think of them more as partners in crime a la Fred and George. Glad that worked well, as well as the interaction with Arielle.

Goodness, I hope I didn't miss a bunch of commas! Glad you enjoyed the story, and thanks for stopping to leave a kind review!

-Amanda


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